Your screenplay deserves more than just a quick pass: It deserves a fair, thoughtful analysis.
I recognize what stops gatekeepers from reading your script and what keeps them engaged and wanting more. I’ll help you see your work from an industry reader’s perspective and guide you toward the strongest, most compelling version that retains your voice and vision.
Choose the service and/or add-ons below that best fit your needs today.
🎞️ The Working Draft: Development Notes
Best for early drafts: See what’s working and what might need further development in future drafts.
You’ll get 1-2 pages of concise, high-level feedback on overall strengths and areas for improvements related to structure, characters, dialogue, story, etc.
Price: $1.00 per screenplay page (e.g., $100 for a 100-page screenplay)
🍿Box Office Ready: In-Depth Notes
Best for advanced drafts: Make sure
You’ll get 4-5 pages of detailed, actionable notes from a deep dive into:
- Structure / pacing
- Characters
- Dialogue
- Story / plot
- Overall strengths / areas for improvement
- Writing / narrative
Price: $1.50 per screenplay page (e.g., $150 for a 100-page screenplay)
🎬 The Final Cut: Proofreading & Editing
Best for final versions ready for contests or submissions: Give your script its best chance to shine by ensuring that no distracting typos, errors or unclear writing gets in the way.
I’ll point out errors in formatting, spelling, grammar and punctuation and offer suggestions for strengthening dialogue, clarity and overall writing.
Price: $50/hour
➕ Add-Ons: Bonus Features
If you’d like help with your logline or one-page synopsis in addition to one of the services above, add it on at the price below.
Note: for standalone logline or synopsis assistance, an extra script reading fee of $0.50 per screenplay page will be assessed.
- Logline development $50
- Logline review/edits $35
- Synopsis development $175
- Synopsis review/edits $75
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